Jumaat, 23 November 2012

Herbalife Bagi side Effect tak?


~Dengan nama allah yang maha permurah lagi maga mengasihani~

Entry kali nie nie tak lain tak bukan nak share Testemoni kakak saya Arjuna Tull Alawiyah.
Sebelum akak saya mnghidap bnyak pnyakit,di usia muda di awal 20-an dah ada darah tinggi,Kalau jatuh ke or terkena ape2,mmg confirm la bengkak

UBAT memg banyak   ..   WAJIB Makan ubat darah tinggi


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Satu lagi penyakit die. ..Die tak boleh solat duduk,Dan dah setahun die terapi di HOSPITAL
Doktor cakap tulang dia tak lekat,mcm haus kirenye.So,setiap hari SELASA,memang ada temujanji dngan DOKTOR kat HOSPITAL.


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Punca penyakit akak ni sebenarnya die kuat makan,makan kadang2 setiap waktu,kalau makanan tak habis,tak perlu nak risau sebab dia ada untuk mnghabiskannya.hahhaha
Nak tengok tak gambar dia dahulu,tapi korang jangan gelak k ^_^


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Waktu nie berat die dalam 89 kg

Gambar ni waktu raya dulu,aq tak boleh bayang lah muka dia



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NAK TENGOK LAGI?






Lepas raya adidilfitri haritu,Pada satu hari tu dia bangun tidur,dia dah tak boleh berjalan,kaki dia tak boleh nak pijak.Kesian giler,Yang saya tahu dia hanya pakai kerusi roda,3 kali dia masuk hospital.almost dekat sebulan lah kot.



Bila saya bagi flyers nak sebnarkan misi Nutrisi,Orang ramai akan cakap

"........ Takpelah dik,akak x berani nak cube ubat kurus ni....."

"...... Mahalnye kak,Kalau kat luar murah je produk lain"

"...... Dik , ada effect tak,takutlah"




NAK TAHU APA JAWAPANNYE?


"Akak/Adik..Herbalife nie bukan UBAT KURUS , UBAT GEMUK ,atau ubat ape2 lah.
Kakak saya dah turun 14 kilo kak,saya minggu petama je dah turun 2 kilo,
kalau nak murah boleh je, akak nampak tak lorong kedai tu,atau kat KAKI LIMA,kat situ ada jual ubat kurus, 5 PIL RM10...
COMPANY HERBALIFE dah berthan selma 32 tahun..

Tapi yang bestnya , ALHAMDULLILAH saya masih hidup kak...."


NAK TAHU LAGI SIDE EFFECT CONSUME HERBALIFE??

KAK ARJUNA DAH LOSE 14 KG

" Ini lah Side Effectnya!!! "

Alahmdullilah,Dah turn 14 kilo..









JOM KITA BUAT PERBEZAAN BAJU YANG SAMA NAK???






THANKS ALLAH    THANKS HERBALIFE 

ALHAMDULLILAH..Sekarang akak dah improve health,Dulu tak boleh jalan,Sekg dah boleh tapi sikit2 lah,terhencut-hencut sedikit.Dah bnyak IMPROVE.

Semuan penyakit bukan HERBALIFE SEMBUH, tapi ALLAH YANG SEMBUH

KITA JUST IKHTIAR DAN UASAHA

Camne nak uasaha or ikhtiar?

START CONSUME HERBALIFE SEKARANG !! 






Rabu, 7 November 2012




Lirik Pujaan Hati – Kangen Band

Hei pujaan hati apa kabarmu
Ku harap kau baik-baik saja
Pujaan hati andai kau tahu
Ku sangat mencintai dirimu

Verse
Hei pujaan hati setiap malam
Aku berdoa kepada sang Tuhan
Berharap cintaku jadi kenyataan
Agar ku tenang meniti kehidupan

Hei pujaan hati pujaan hati
Pujaan hati pujaan hati

Chorus
Mengapa kau tak membalas cintaku
Mengapa engkau abaikan rasaku
Ataukah mungkin hatimu membeku
Hingga kau tak pernah pedulikan aku
Hei pujaan hati pujaan hati

Ulang Verse

Pujaan hati pujaan hati
Pujaan hati pujaan hati

Ulang Chorus

Cobalah mengerti keadaanku
Dan cobalah fahami keinginanku
Ku ingin engkau menjadi milikku
Lengkapi jalan cerita hidupku

Hei pujaan hati pujaan hati
Pujaan hati pujaan hati
Pujaan hati pujaan hati
Pujaan hati pujaan hati





video

Isnin, 5 November 2012

Sambutan Raya Aidilfitri 2012

~Dengan nama Allah Yang Maha permurah lagi Maha Penyayang~

Alahamdullila 2x..Rasanya dah lama giler tak updated blog,rasanya dah start bersawang and setakat nie tak tumbuh lagi labah2..Seaptutnya cerita hari raya nie dah lama berlalu,and sepatutnya dah lama updated but aku nak gak updated..Kenangan hari raya tahun seronok sangat 2x,Tema raya kitaorng Purple Pink..Fuhh semngat kan,nak satu warna..hehh..Macam biasa kitaorng dah 5 tahun beraya di rumah sendiri.My parents merupakan anak yatim piatu.Arwah atuk dan nenek kedua2 belah dah lama meninggalkan kami since aku kecil lagi..Al Fatihah buat mereka..

Al-Fatihah..




















Seperti biasa,Pagi2 kena bangun..takbir,memuji kebesaran Allah,Hari kemenangan Umat Islam..Alhamdullilah.Nasib baik kali nie aku berkesempatan untuk menunaikan solat..Lepas je solat Hari Raya,Kamiorng sekeluarga bermaaf-maafan,nie paling menghayat hati..Serious parents aku kalau time2 nie,mesti mengalirkan air mata..Lepas tue,kitaorng adik beradik saling mintak maaf,kot2 ada tersalah bahasa.. ^_^
Lepas tue,apalagi kitaorng------------?
hehhe beraya lah,pergi rumah sanak saudara kat kampung <3 p="p">
Pagi2 raya aq semangat giler tau x sebb aper.A new face.hehehe,Muka bersiih sikit sebelum ni kan ada jerawat,
Thanks Allah,thanks HERBALIFE <3 td="td">

semngat aku bergambar dengan botol HERBALIFE

Inii gambar sekeluarga.Tema raya Purple Pink (sama kan baju)








Ini cousin aq yang palng tua,Anak2 die dah besar,ada yang tua dari aq rasanya..

Ini siblings adik beradik Abah,Dari kiri Oncu,Abah,Mak Ngah Siti

Mempersembahkan Parents yang tesayang, InsyAllah  semoga berkekalan  ^_^






Nie kakak aq,dulu berat die 90 lebih,die start minum Herbalife,Sekag dah 77 kilo..teruskan..


Nie cousin2 aq..hehe

Nie abah ngan mak


Kaum Adam dalam Family aq


Cube teka laki duk sebelah aq tue sapa??Tunang or suami??
Takla,salah tekaan korang,Tue abang sulung aq

Seronok kan tengok gambar??Seronok bila adik beradik berkumpul,rasa meriah,kalau x rumah mesti sunyi.Lepas je habis raya,terus kene prepared untuk Final Exam!!Fuhhh takut sangat2..
Tapi Alhamdullilah Allah kan ada,Ape yang Allah tetapkan,tue sama Rezeki Allah.<3 p="p">

Rabu, 22 Ogos 2012

RESEPI IKAN TENGGIRI MASAK SAMBAL LADA





  Entry kali nie nak pasal menu Ikan tenggiri masak sambal lada.Simple je..Siapa2 yng dok baru khawin.jom la try...Masa anggran untuk hidangan nie around 15 minit...
Bahan-Bahan

3 Potong bahagian ikan tenggiri
5 biji bawang merah (kalau takde,bawang besar pun boleh,)
Lada kering yang dah dimesin (Beli je lada kering kat kedai pastu mesin)

Cara Memasak


Mula bersihkan ikan tersebut,lepastu gaul kan dengan kunyit.Simple kan?

Hiris bwang kecik dalam beberapa bahagian
Tumbuk bawang dengan lumatnyer...seblum tue masukkan sekali garam...secukup rasa (garam tue agak2 la)

lepas dah tumbuk,angkat ke tepi



kemudian,tambah lada yang dah dimesin ke dalam bawang yang dah ditumbuk tadi..
.Ikutlah lada tu bnyak mana.Gaulkan lada ngan bwang yng dah ditumbuk
Lepastu goreng ikan tenggiri..Angkat dan letak ketepi.
Tumis lada yang dah digaul ngan bawang tadi...jangn tumis sekjap snagat.kang  x masak plak lada.



kalau nak sedap,bubuhla perencah Hilal..heheh..promote jap...kalau tawar bubuhla garam cikit.,
Kemudian,masukkan ikan tenggiri yang dah digoreng tadi,gaulkan.

Ok..dah siap pun..sedap sangt...hehhe
 

Ahad, 5 Ogos 2012

Ramadhan Karim+Maigrain+Penat

~Dengan nama allah yang maha permurah lagi maha Penyayang~

  Alhamdullilah.....syukur sangat pada Allah..Coz harini dah 16 hari umat islam menunaikan ibadah puasa..amazing..tambahan dah nak masuk malam yng ke 10 terakhir...kene lipat gandakan amalan ni.InsyAllah..Ramdhan tahun nie..bnyak sangat cabaran yg saya hadapi...Salah satunya Magrain+cepat penat...

MAIGRAIN.
apakah itu magrain?
Migrain adalah sakit kepala yang menyakitkan, berdenyut-denyut dan berlangsung antara 4-72 jam sehingga seseorang itu tidak mampu melakukan pekerjaan rutin hariannya.Seriously...mmg sakit kot..Maigrain nie mula hadir dalam hidup saya since saya skolah menengah...Sampai sekarang saya stillambik ubat doktor..Pil2...hahahaCam sakit kritikal..but secara jujur..Saya rasa cam kesian kat badan saya...bile sakit...mkn ubat..2 3 bijik telan...


APA PENYEBAB MIGRAINE?
Menurut kajian, migrain boleh disebabkan oleh pelbagai faktor. Pada asasnya, apabila berlaku migrain saluran darah akan mengembang dan menguncup menyebabkan kita berasa sakit kepala yang berdenyut-denyut.Migrain boleh disebabkan oleh faktor keturunan. Jika ibu mengalami migrain semasa muda, anaknya juga boleh mengalami migrain.


PENAT
penat nie biasa berlaku dikalangan semua orang...Pergi kerja naik bas..penat..Lepas sapu sampah penat..
Tapi penat saya lain sangat...Dari kecik..Saya memang cepat penat..Kalau saya join aktiviti aper pun..conform pastu muka pucat cam sakit..Mesti kawan2 akan cakap.Sakinah ok?Sakinah sakit ker?haha...Serias...memang tak leh jalan jauh...Kalau nak involve aper2 pun..saya pikir dua kali...Kang kalau sakit menyusahkan orang plak..

Bila dah masuk U...Bnyak aktiviti kene join....penat pun berganda2 lah...Serias memang sedih....tambahan kalau maigrain...memang kene sujud lama..Supaya darah tu turun..Tapi boleh than dalam beberapa minit je...Lepas tue sakit balik...Bile g klinik UIa...doktor just bg ubat tahan sakit....Sebb surat pngesahan dari Hopital temerloh xde...Tambhan stok ubat maigrain dari hospital tmerloh dah hbis pun...Terpaksalah mkn ubat than sakit...:(

Kesihatan tue sangat berharga...Seharusnya sebagai umat islam kita kene selalu berdoa supaya allah panjangkan umur kita agar kita boleh beribadat dan kesihatan yang berpanjangan...InsyAllah...

Ahad, 29 Julai 2012

La tahzan :(

~Dengan nama Allah yang Maha permurah lagi Maha Penyayang~

Allahamdullilah...Dah lapan hari termasuk harini umat islam performberpuasa...mungkin Ramadhan kali nie adalah terakhir buat saya...mungkin tahun depan..Sesungguhnye Allah Allah yng maha mngetahui segalanye..^_^

Rasanya dah lama x update blog...Dulu rajin la update...Update pun pasal IELTS untuk new students...After that dah takde masa dah =='..Hai Sakinah..Allah kan bagi masa 24 jam..knpa x cukup plak???Bg saya,biar lah saya stop dulu Bloggger...

Sem  baru nie adalah cabaran yng saya besar bg saya...Walaupun ambik 4 subjek....but 3 of theme semua mmbaca...Nak ngis.........Allah je yng tahu..Mngis dalam hati... :'( Tambahan sibuk dengan beberapa activity..Cadangnye sem ni nak apply jadi mentor...mmg wishlist saya ...tapi bile tengok subject yang diambil..Fuhhhhhhhhhhhh...rasa mcam nak batalkan je..Sedih + nangis!!tapi saya teruskan jugak....x thu lah layak ke x..

Seminggu nie saya rasa mmg mnggu Menagis....Biler berbuka je saya mmg xde mood...so mkn jelah ape2 je...Kadng2 saya berbuka kat masjid...Bukan niat nak jimat..cuma saya nak ketengan..Minggu tue lah saya kne hantar lab report...Quiz Chem..Quiz comp...Tuhan jelah tahu...bile saya ingat susah pyah nie...Saya sebut nama Makkkkkkkkk.....My mum is my inspiration<3 Saya ngs...Byangkan semmgu saya tumpukan belajar...Saya study...saya berdoa....hari last quiz...Saya rasa down sangt..rasa nak pitam je...tapi saya pergi gak quiz....

Time quiz...tue alhamdullilah saya dapt jawab...But ada soalanyng senang...Tapi disebbkan saya terlalu pikir dan pnt..saya mmg tak tumpukan sepenuhnye quiz saya.ada yng salah...Kawan2 yng lain semua dah siap and dah balik....Tinggal saya ngan seorng kawan dan lecturer....saya thu mmg result quiz nie x akan perform...Tapi saya berserah pada Allah...TAWAKAL....Ye..tawakal....saya kne redha dengan ape yng ditetapkn oleh Allah...

Saya sabar dan terus sabar....Melangkah naik je tangga  menuju ke mhalah...Air mata saya mngalir...setitik demi setitik...Cepat2 saya lap...dan terus menyorok dan cari port sesuai....nak ngis nak ngadu kat Allah..Ya Allah..Aku pnat ....tapi biler pikir balik...Ramai orng yng bermati-matian study pastu meeting lagi ada program lagi...lagi pnat....

Harini saya dilanda kesedihan...Ujian nie buat saya tabah....mebi saya pernah buat salah...Biler syaa pikir2 balik...Saya selalu ingatkan diri saya supaya bersabar....Tetapi disebalik kesabaran saya..air mata mnjadi peneman saya.....Allah kan ada sakinah....He knows the best for u !!
Bile2 pikir2 balik....kiter kene bersabar...Jng sedih2 Allah kan ada...Tahan yer....^_^

2 minggu lagi...midsem saya...Mnggu yng paling sya takut...But for sure lah Allah lah paling ditakuti...Saya selalu pesan kat abah dan mak....Jngan lupe doakan kiter yer....Kite perlukan doa mak dan abah...abah pulak selalu cakap..Setiap hari abah doakan untuk anak2 abah...Saya terharu...Orng yng saya sayng doakan syaa....^_^ Pengorabanan mak sangat besar2...Mak sellu buat saya hepi....buat saya semangat....Kalau diberi pilihan..saya nak sangat duduk ngan mak selamanye...

Apepun yang terjadi....Allah knows the best for me <3 LA TAHZAN Sakinah =='



Ahad, 20 Mei 2012

3 SAMPLE EPT TASK 2 (New)

~Dengan nama Allah yang maha Permurah lagi maha Penyayang~  

    Entry kali ini Sis akan tekankan pasal TASK 2..Sebab ape????
Sebab..untuk pngtahuan..TASK 2 sangat penting...Band yang adik2 akan dapat majo akan based on TASK 2..Sebab TASK 1 sangat mudah ^_^ adik2 boleh hafal term2 yang selalu digunakan..For instance increased slightly,rose rapidly,dramatic fall..etc...But TASK 2 adik2 kene bg opinion sendiri,tak boleh hafal...=='
Here, ada 3contoh sample TASK 2..Take a look..kalau ada correction..Blh bgthu ok :)
BTW Good luck EPT..Band 6 yup!!


SAMPLE 1

Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have a greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
You should write at least 250 words.
     A child is born to two parents – a man and a woman. Both sexes play a crucial role in raising the child. Although fathers can make excellent parents, in my opinion, it is strongly agreed that mothers are in reality better parents based on their natural intuition and compassionate tendencies.
    Firstly,for a wide variety of socio-cultural reasons, women tend to have more intuitive intelligence than men. It is this intuition that enables the mother to know when her child needs her.In addition,women often know how to read non-verbal signals in human behavior, which can alert them to issues and problems in the child’s life. All of these “perceptive skills” play a major role in making the mother a close, responsible and responsive parent.
   Secondly, most mothers share a inimitable bond with their children. Perhaps this bond arises during the nine months of pregnancy; perhaps it is reinforced through the act of breastfeeding. Whatever the cause, there often appears to be a lifelong silver chord or psychic connection between mother and child. As a result, the mother is able to evaluate the child’s actions from the viewpoint of his/her intentions, and not just results. This empathy is priceless and cannot easily be replicated. Although fathers may form deep loving bonds with their children, they may not be able to match the depth of closeness shared by mother and child.
   In conclusion, although both parents are certainly capable of caring for the child, the mother often makes a better parent. Anyone who has experienced the unconditional acceptance of a mother’s love can bear witness to this reality.

SAMPLE 2
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    In today's modern world, computers are an essential part of everyday life. Around the globe, children often use computers from a very young age. Although it is important for children to participate in various well-balanced activities, in my opinion, children who use the computer daily are actually developing a critical skill for future success. The bases for my views are personal and academic.
  From a personal point of view, computers are an invaluable resource to help young people explore the world around them. For example, children who use Internet to satisfy their curiosity about diverse topics are already becoming independent learners. No child with a computer is ever bored! By starting early in their lives, children feel totally at ease around computers; they are also able to take advantage of the wide range of services computers provide.
   From an academic viewpoint, children have no choice but to master this technological invention. For instance, when I was in university, students brought their laptops to class to take notes, do research and exchange information. They wrote assignments, created presentations and developed databases. Children who build early confidence and experience in these abilities are at a distinct advantage over those who have not.
   In conclusion, there is no doubt that the computer as a technological tool is here to stay. The sooner children become computer-literate, the better for many aspects of their future lives.

SAMPLE 3

Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.

How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
   It is probably true to say that most people believe that a university degree is the only way to get a good job. I think this is true in certain areas, while in other areas, a degree is not as useful.

   Firstly, many people have ambitions to become a qualified professional and there is no doubt that becoming a doctor or a lawyer, for example, is only possible with a degree. Another advantage of graduating from university is that it gives you more choices when it comes to choosing a job. Most employers will be more impressed by a candidate who has a degree than they would be by one who only has high school qualifications because it shows a certain level of intelligence and education, as well as the commitment and self-discipline that is needed In order to study a degree course for three or four years.
    On the other hand, there might be some benefit to starting your career early, especially if your chosen field is one which does not typically require a university education. This would apply to somebody who wants to be a car mechanic, or a fashion designer, for instance, who would not necessarily gain anything from going to university. The hands-on experience you gain in your job while others are studying for a degree can give you a distinct advantage. I once read about a man who left school at sixteen and went on to become a wealthy and successful investment broker. He claimed that he had learned all he needed to know by working in his chosen field and that he could not have done any better by getting a degree.

   In conclusion, it is possible to get a good job without going to university. Having said that, some professions, such as the law, require you to have a degree and as stated above a University degree could potentially open more doors when looking for a job.

Jumaat, 11 Mei 2012

New sample English EPT

~Dengn nama Allah yang maha permurah lagi maha mengasihani~

Sample ni Saya buat sendiri sebab sample sebelum nie bahasa die sangt tinggi ^_^ Take a look yer~

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007

Y axis-percentage
X axis-Households with regular use of a car,Greet Britian



          The line graph above shows the pecentage of  households with regular use of a car between the years 1971 and 2007.
         
         It can be seen clearly that,there are two basic general trends,upward and downward.In regards to the first,the percentage of a car ownership with two cars increased significantly between the years 1971 and 2007.By contrast,there was a significant decrease in the percentage of car ownership with no car from 1971 to 2007.However,there was not much difference in the percentage of car ownership with one car and three or more cars.

         In conclusion,it obviously shows that the percentage of car ownership with two cars is higher than three or more cars.It is predicted that the percentage of household with regular use of a car will increase in the following years.



Khamis, 10 Mei 2012

Sample EPT TASK 1 and TASK 2

~Dengan nama Allah yng maha permurah lagi maha mengasihani~


SAMPLE EPT FOR STUDENTS CFS IIUM 


(Task 1 and Task 2)


TASK 1


Actually graph ada bnyak tau..but kita tekankan 3 sahja yer..Bese nie yng ditnya dalam exam~
1) Bar graph
2) Line graph
3) Pie chart

Next,sebanrnya model answer kat bawah semua mnggunakan bhasa yang sangat tinggi..hhaha.


1)First INTRODUCTION----------------------->


Example : The graph above shows the number of students from different courses in CFSIIUM in 2013.
The courses included are Engineering,Physical science,Law and Dentists.


(Korang buat dalam satu ayat ke dua ayat..jngn pnjng sangat tau)


2) Second BODY GRAPH------------------------------>


Example : It can be seen clearly that,there are two basic general trends,upward and downward.
Dalam pragh2 ni korng kene bnyak compare,tngok mna yng the highest and the lowest.


Bese kan guna perkataan DIBAWAH :


*Besides                                                                 *Increased slightly          
*On the other hand                                                  *Rose rapidly
*However                                                               *Significant decrease
*In contrast                                                             *Level out
*Similarly                                                                *Dramatic fall
*In Conclusion                                                        *Reached A peak
*In can be seen clearly that
*It obviously shows that


3) LAST PARAGRAPH-------------------------------->


Example : In conclusion,it obviously shows that the percentage of car ownership with two cars is higher than three or more cars.


MODEL 1




Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
  • You should write at least 150 words.
  • Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.

IELTS Writing Samples
IELTS Academic Writing Samples
model answer:
The graphs compare the number of deaths caused by six diseases in Someland in 1990 with the amount of research funding allocated to each of those diseases. It can be clearly seen that the amount of research funding in many cases did not correlate with the seriousness of the disease in terms of numbers of deaths.

In 1990 there were around 0.2 million deaths from AIDS, 0.1 million deaths from leprosy, 0.3 million deaths from tropical diseases, 0.5 million deaths from diarrhoea, 0.4 million deaths from malaria and 1.8 million deaths from TB. These figures can be contrasted with the amount of funding allocated for each disease. In 1990 AIDS received 180 million dollars in research funding, leprosy 80 million dollars in research funding, tropical diseases 79 million dollars in research funding, diarrhoea 60 million dollars in research funding, malaria 50 million dollars and TB 20 million dollars in research funding.

In conclusion it is clear that funding allocation for disease research in Someland is not wholly determined by the number of deaths for which each disease is responsible in a given year.



MODEL 2


You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.
Write at least 150 words.
IELTS
model answer:
The two graphs show that oil was the major energy source in the USA in both 1980 and 1990 and that coal, natural gas and hydroelectric power remained in much the same proportions. On the other hand, there was a dramatic rise in nuclear power, which doubled its percentage over the ten years.

Oil supplied the largest percentage of energy, although the percentage decreased from 42% in 1980 to 33% in 1990. Coal in 1990 was the second largest source of energy, increasing its proportion to 27% from 22% in the previous decade. Natural gas, the second largest source in 1980 at 26%, decreased its share very slightly to provide 25% of America’s energy ten years later. There was no change in the percentage supplied by hydroelectric power which remained at 5% of the total energy used. Nuclear power the greatest change: in 1990 it was 10%, twice that of the 1980s.
(152 words)




MODEL 3

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 words.
IELTS
model answer:
The graph shows the preferred leisure sctivities of Australian children aged 5-14. As might be expected, it is clear from the data that sedentary pursuits are far more popular nowadays than active ones.

Of the 10,000 children that were interviewed, all the boys and girls stated that they enjoyed watching TV or videos in their spare time. In addition, the second most popular activity, attracting 80% of boys and 60% of girls, was playing electronic or computer games. While girls rated activities such as art and craft highly – just under 60% stated that they enjoyed these in their spare time – only 35% of boys opted for creative pastimes. Bike riding, on the other hand, was almost as popular as electronic games amongst boys and, perhaps surprisingly, almost 60% of girls said that they enjoyed this too. Skateboarding was relatively less popular amongst both boys and girls, although it still attracted 35% of boys and 25% of girls.
(157 words)



MODEL 4

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
You should write at least 150 words.
IELTS
model answer:
   The graph shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 users, for selected countries. Overall, most of the countries included in the graph have more mobile phones subscribers than landlines.

  Most European countries have high mobile phone use. The biggest users of mobile phones are the Italians, with 88 cell phones per 100 people. For example, Italy has twice as many mobile phones as landlines, with 88 mobiles per hundred people compared to 45 for landlines. Mobile phone use is low in Canada, with fewer than 40 phones per 100 people. Denmark is also unusual because it has slightly more landlines than mobile phones.

  However, in some countries, the number of landlines is higher than the number of mobile phones. One example is the USA, where the number of mobiles, at 50 per 100 people, is much lower than the number of landlines, at almost 70 per hundred. A similar pattern can be seen in Canada. The highest number of landlines in the graph is in Denmark, with about 90 per 100 people. In contrast, the lowest figures for fixed lines are in Italy and the UK.

  In conclusion, it seems that mobile phone use is higher in Europe than in North America.



MODEL 5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. You should write at least 150 words.


IELTS

  The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between the years 1960 and 1995. As an overall trend, it is clear that the number of cases of the disease increased fairly rapidly until the mid seventies, remained constant for around a decade at 500 cases before dropping to zero in the late 80s.

  In 1960, the number of cases stood at approximately 100. That number rose steadily to 200 by 1969 and then more sharply to 500 in 1977. At this point the number of cases remained stable until 1984 before plummeting to zero by 1988. From 1988 to 1995 Someland was free of the disease.

I  n conclusion, the graph shows that the disease was increasingly prevalent until the 1980s when it was eradicated from Someland.




TASK 2

EXAMPLE 1

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

        There is no doubt that education and the learning process has changed since the introduction of computers: The search for information has become easier and amusing, and connectivity has expedited the data availability. Though experts systems have made computers more intelligent, they have not yet become a substitute of the human interaction in the learning process. In my opinion; what can be expected, is a change of the teachers? role but not their disappearance from the classroom.





   Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an enjoyable task for a kid. This, accompanied with the relaxing attitude and software interactivity, usually conduce to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher educational level; the availability of digital books, simulator and other academic materials, provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that otherwise would not be at hand.
But, besides the increasing complexity and behavior of intelligent software, which is usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need of human interaction in the learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the necessity for a human being to be able to determine what thespecifics needs of each individual are. The expertise of a teacher in how to explain and adapt complex concepts to different individuals can hardly be mimicked by a computer, no matter how sophisticated its software is.
As computers are becoming a common tool for teaching, teachers should be more aware of their role as guides in the acquisition of knowledge rather than transmitters of facts. They have to be open minded to the changes that are taking places, keep updated and serve as a problem solvers in the learning process, thus allowing students to discover the fact for themselves.

          To summarize, in my personal view, teachers play and will() play an important role in the classroom, especially at the primary level. No matter how complex computers become, there will be no replacement for the human interaction, but in the way haw thisinteraction takes place.


EXAMPLE 2

Should students travel?


 Some people think that students who don’t take a break in studies between a high school and a university are at disadvantage compared to students that travel and work after high school before furthering their education. Do you agree or disagree?


    Nowadays, in our competitive world, to succeed, knowledge from school and university is not enough. Therefore, the student who study from the school to university get benefit less and contribute less too, than those of student who travel or work and get experience and skills before going high. There are two following reasons to prove for my opinion. I call the group of people who study from school to university is group A and the other group is group B.


    Firstly, at school and university, what group A gain is almost theory, theory and theory. Of course, theory is very neccessary, however, you can’t do everything with theory. You must have praticeable experience. This is what group A lack very much. Although in the third of forth year at university, group A can be apprentices in some companies, to help them approach their future jobs, they aren’t trained well because of short time. And the real job is still very strange with them. After graduating, without experience, group A can’t accomplish their work perfectly. On the other hand, it takes them time and money to keep up with other experienced ones and may be scorned. Therefore, group A can contribute less than group B who have the most two important things: skills and experience.


   Secondly, as group A is contributing less, they surely get less benefit.    Moreover, many companies which employ people in group A have to train them from the back-ground. These companies take this cost from group A’s salary to get rid of the fact that their employees may leave after being trained to other companies. So, less benefit is unavoidable and certain, Whereas group B members are more loyal and effective workers. They also have useful experience and skills. Besides, their education is the same as or even higher than group A. As the result, group B gets more benefit absolutely.


  In conclusion, I think student should travel or work before going to the university. That way, not only will they have basic knowledge but also skills and experience which are useful for them to get a good job and have a brilliant future.


EXAMPLE 3


In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion on this?

     Nowadays, many children involved in different types of jobs to have some kind of financial assurance for themselves. However, whether this is good for their development and personality is a much debatable issue. I personally believe that paid works is harmful for children for several reasons.
     It is said that children learn valuable experience in the work place. This may be true. However, I would argue that children are mainly employed for jobs that require manual work and are low paid. The recent statistic reveals the common tasks that children are assigned are washing dishes, cleaning floors or serving food in restaurants. Meanwhile, this kind of jobs actually do not provide children with necessary and useful skills so that they can apply in their future carrer.
This brings me to the second point. Defenders of child work arguesthat it is an effective method of learning. The point is children should be able to apply knowledge taught to them in a real life working environment. Although this is undoubtedly true, it also means that children may neglect the classroom study and even fail the class. The worst thing is yet to come. They may become so occupied with the benefits ahead of them like small salary and leave school.
Finally, supporters said that it helps them to build responsibility in the family. They will understand how it is difficult to earn money and therefore have a compassionate view with their parents. This is true to a certain extent, but may have a totally adverse effect on children. As children can make money at an early age, they would feel that it is appropriate to spend on luxury things by their own money, which could be recovered later.

      In conclusion, I think that parents should take measures to restrict their child to work, otherwise it would have a negative consequences on their futures.



EXAMPLE 4

 Internet as a source of information


 Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement?


Some people believe that internet access creates problems. There are several possible reasons why it can happen.


      First, some data may be unverifiable. For example, everytime they search for a data, there would be lots of choices that would appear on the screen. They would not be sure if the data they are reading has accurate information. Some sources have even outdated informations. Second, some sites may be unreliable. For instance, people sign up on one site that sells goods using online purchases. The goods would be paid for by credit card but the purchaser would not receive anything. And finally, not everything is available through the net. When my friend had tried to research for some pictures of 18th century paintings, he did not find any results. Then he was told by his teacher that it would only be available in the library.


     Others believe that internet is very useful and these are the justifications. First, it is hard to get data, that is available in the net by other means. For example, if directory information could not give me the accurate address and contact number of the place I want to visit, I normally check that information from the Internet. In just one click, I would get all the details of that certain company. Second, research becomes more comprehensive. For instance, I do not have to buy lots of reading materials to complete my research. Most of the needed information can be found if I have Internet access. And finally, data is easily compared and contrasted. I remember, my cousin researched the study about overweight children a decade ago and at present. He was able to finish his research in just one day, as compared to week if he would not use the Internet.


     In conclusion, let me reiterate that the Internet plays a big role in our life, because it makes data retrieval and comparison easier.



EXAMPLE 5


 Internet and communication


Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another.


     A global village, that is certainly what the world feels like nowadays. With the help of the world wide web, you can reach out and get to know people you might never meet in person. Articles can be coauthored, business deals can be finalized, degrees can be earned and at times even medical advice can be given?and all of this is just a click away.


      Electronic mail, instant messages, web cameras and microphones; all these gadgets and programs make the presence of the other the person more real. Who knows; with the help of visual reality you might even get a 3-D image of the speaker! I believe that the internet is one the best inventions of the last century, you can hardly get to miss anyone and nobody is really out of reach. You will get to keep the channels patent with your friends, and will be able to do your work from your bedroom in your pajamas!


      However, the internet can also be a major source of harassment. Spammers and hackers can invade your privacy and get personal/confidential information, which otherwise they will never get access to. You are never out of anybody’s reach, unless you make a conscious decision of not checking your email, there can be always more work waiting for you in your inbox and you might never have a moment for yourself. Worse, if you were a workaholic, you might never experience that stress-free vacation ever again in your life?simply, because you have your mobile workplace with you.


       As a romantic, I will always look forward to getting an occasional letter in the snail mail. A personal letter, where I can sense the mood of the writer by the slants in his/her handwriting and get to know him/her better. But as a type A personality person, the internet gives me all what I dream of in communication?speed, reliability, and convenience of time and place. I can certainly tolerate its shortcomings any day, as long as it keeps me close to my loved ones.